An OK flash but way too short.
I think you did a very nice job on the sprite animation, you got that down. The 2 major things you are missing is a story line and a longer movie. Have various scenes in your flash. An example would be to have one part at a beach and another scene at a hotel. Again, it wasn't bad considering it was your first sprite movie. I think if you just fix a few things up this flash has real potential. Good Luck!
-Henry